The Plot
In summers 2010, when crime has made it's deep roots in the City of Karachi, the activities rise in the localities of the city. In a small area of the city known as F.B. Area Block 20, lives an emotionally and financially deprived physically smart person named Abd and nearby lives Asfar, another person who's elder than Abd, is in his mid 20s and is an experienced senior member of a criminal organization which seems to be the subsidiary of the large D-Company. Asfar handles his area and is in need of a great helping hand.
On a saturday in mid summers, Abd, on his daily routine sitting in a park finds Asfar terribly observing Abd. Asfar reaches Abd and gradually makes Abd his friend, along with giving him a new identity through his criminal group. Abd has no reason to disagree, because he wants respect in his neighborhood as all of the boys his age have and therefore, enters the realm of the criminal world, still not getting close enough due to his new entry. Abd has to kill his conscience by killing a culprit of the group. He has to stab him to death to prove that he deserves what he really wants, a new life. Asfar, present in the room along with the bruised culprit, who seems to be a normal person with no direct criminal affiliation and Abd, wait for Abd to kill that person. Abd succeeds.
He is now Asfar's right hand and sticks together with him, doing jobs for him. Abd learns about one of the senior most members of his group who operate at a bigger strategic level, Kaleem Bhai. Kaleem gives direct orders to Asfar and keeps Asfar as his best followers. Abd never gets to meet Kaleem, because he has never reached that level, yet. There are some rules of the group, as there are in every organized group, disobeying pays death.
After a year of their joint venture and success in the criminal world, Abd receives a call from his informer that Kaleem Bhai and his minions are after Asfar and him to kill him, because he did not obey Kaleem bhai on killing an orphan witness who earned a living for his family. Kaleem disobeyed and now must face the consequence. Abd and Asfar start planning a get away to another city though a land route as soon as they get the information and they decide they would initiate after two days, on Sunday, where the world tends to sleep, but criminal organizations and their leaders decide major things. This would be the best chance for the getaway because most of Kaleem's watchmen would be with Kaleem.
On Sunday morning, around 9:00 AM to 10:00 AM, Asfar and Abd both engage in their plan of escaping, but by different routes, because they both know anything can happen in the way and one must survive. Afsar is lucky enough to get away clean, but Abd is caught by Kaleem's men. Kaleem interrogates Abd, beating him. Abd refuses to say anything about Asfar and is eventually killed by Kaleem.
Conflict
-Abd's main conflict with the criminal system/structure.
Resolution
-Abd loses from the criminal system because as a rule of nature, an individual can not bring down a whole structure which comprises of several individuals as Abd, maybe better.
In summers 2010, when crime has made it's deep roots in the City of Karachi, the activities rise in the localities of the city. In a small area of the city known as F.B. Area Block 20, lives an emotionally and financially deprived physically smart person named Abd and nearby lives Asfar, another person who's elder than Abd, is in his mid 20s and is an experienced senior member of a criminal organization which seems to be the subsidiary of the large D-Company. Asfar handles his area and is in need of a great helping hand.
On a saturday in mid summers, Abd, on his daily routine sitting in a park finds Asfar terribly observing Abd. Asfar reaches Abd and gradually makes Abd his friend, along with giving him a new identity through his criminal group. Abd has no reason to disagree, because he wants respect in his neighborhood as all of the boys his age have and therefore, enters the realm of the criminal world, still not getting close enough due to his new entry. Abd has to kill his conscience by killing a culprit of the group. He has to stab him to death to prove that he deserves what he really wants, a new life. Asfar, present in the room along with the bruised culprit, who seems to be a normal person with no direct criminal affiliation and Abd, wait for Abd to kill that person. Abd succeeds.
He is now Asfar's right hand and sticks together with him, doing jobs for him. Abd learns about one of the senior most members of his group who operate at a bigger strategic level, Kaleem Bhai. Kaleem gives direct orders to Asfar and keeps Asfar as his best followers. Abd never gets to meet Kaleem, because he has never reached that level, yet. There are some rules of the group, as there are in every organized group, disobeying pays death.
After a year of their joint venture and success in the criminal world, Abd receives a call from his informer that Kaleem Bhai and his minions are after Asfar and him to kill him, because he did not obey Kaleem bhai on killing an orphan witness who earned a living for his family. Kaleem disobeyed and now must face the consequence. Abd and Asfar start planning a get away to another city though a land route as soon as they get the information and they decide they would initiate after two days, on Sunday, where the world tends to sleep, but criminal organizations and their leaders decide major things. This would be the best chance for the getaway because most of Kaleem's watchmen would be with Kaleem.
On Sunday morning, around 9:00 AM to 10:00 AM, Asfar and Abd both engage in their plan of escaping, but by different routes, because they both know anything can happen in the way and one must survive. Afsar is lucky enough to get away clean, but Abd is caught by Kaleem's men. Kaleem interrogates Abd, beating him. Abd refuses to say anything about Asfar and is eventually killed by Kaleem.
Conflict
-Abd's main conflict with the criminal system/structure.
Resolution
-Abd loses from the criminal system because as a rule of nature, an individual can not bring down a whole structure which comprises of several individuals as Abd, maybe better.
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